Comment on Emily’s Blog

Hi Emily, I was wondering where the domino’s took place in this story, but then I realised. I also found this piece a bit brutal, but I bet some others can make a connection to this. Really good Emily! -Grace

Comment on Joseph Krakowski/Dylan’s blog

Hi Dylan, I thought this piece was quite interesting, but I can relate. I didn’t quite get how someone goes out and gets a new toy robot in a certain colour in only a few minutes, but overall I liked this writing prompt. Maybe next time don’t try and ‘swear’ in your writing. -Grace